tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6824105.post110919935519209072..comments2023-08-29T02:44:37.646-05:00Comments on WORD: An Agitated A*S Monkey.: I may have mentioned this before.Fist of Truenesshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17539333761513874499noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6824105.post-4226811441743842042018-06-19T21:12:13.273-05:002018-06-19T21:12:13.273-05:00A powerful share, I just given this onto a colleag...A powerful share, I just given this onto a colleague who was doing a little evaluation on this. And he in actual fact purchased me breakfast as a result of I discovered it for him.. smile. So let me reword that: Thnx for the deal with! But yeah Thnkx for spending the time to debate this, I really feel strongly about it and love studying extra on this topic. If possible, as you turn out to be expertise, would you thoughts updating your blog with more details? It's highly helpful for me. 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Who knows?<br /><br />Brother Nick – glad you liked it! This one was completely fictional though, unlike others I’ve posted. Word. I’ll try to post again today, but my schedule might get packed-up by meetings and shit.Fist of Truenesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17539333761513874499noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6824105.post-1109308779445080932005-02-24T23:19:00.000-06:002005-02-24T23:19:00.000-06:00Dude, that story was a trip. Ray's the man! all st...Dude, that story was a trip. Ray's the man! all stinky in stuff. Keep these stories on a roll, it helps me escape from my own life.<br /><br />brother nickAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6824105.post-1109300440713595002005-02-24T21:00:00.000-06:002005-02-24T21:00:00.000-06:00I have no clue. maybe i haven't heard it and just...I have no clue. maybe i haven't heard it and just think i did--or perhaps in a movie or in a book. i've never been in a ghetto though, so I doubt i picked it up on the street. <br /><br />but then again, that might depend on what your definition of ghetto is. <br /><br />whatever. basically i have no clue where or from what i heard it.firedancerdancinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00478709046998860569noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6824105.post-1109293845033273232005-02-24T19:10:00.000-06:002005-02-24T19:10:00.000-06:00Only because an eight-year-old spread it, I will s...Only because an eight-year-old spread it, I will shut my pie to the "retarded" comment. First time round I felt he was done, the end and I didn't like that ending. I had to reread the last paragraph and try it another way because I enjoyed it more if I felt that he goes and meets Ray next. Basically, you sucked me in and I wanted to be part of Ray's next no plan mishan. As usual, I enjoyed being a reader. Good job and two pats for your back. Keep them words coming!<br />SusieAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6824105.post-1109272307200952222005-02-24T13:11:00.000-06:002005-02-24T13:11:00.000-06:00Hey Mel! Glad you liked it. I am wondering where...Hey Mel! Glad you liked it. I am wondering where I heard "the sugars" from, and I honestly don't remember. Do you remember where you heard it? <br /><br />Mamma Lara! Thanks for dropping by! I hear you on the short story thing. But that's the nature of the beast. To me, a good short story does end (in the 'wrap up' sense of the word) but more in a freeze-frame fashion. No wandering off into a sunset. Almost open-ended, and available for infinite interpretation. So, there could not be any more to this story for me. <br /><br />I just don't know if my point came across.Fist of Truenesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17539333761513874499noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6824105.post-1109269693795975822005-02-24T12:28:00.000-06:002005-02-24T12:28:00.000-06:00I liked it! good job with the kid-speak, and I go...I liked it! good job with the kid-speak, and I got "the sugars" sorta, figuring I had a slightly better idea of it than the kid. My only issue would be that it's a short story, and I want to go on to chapters 2, 3, ...<br />lbmAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6824105.post-1109267912136798492005-02-24T11:58:00.000-06:002005-02-24T11:58:00.000-06:00coke= soda.
I realize it sounds a lot worse to sa...coke= soda.<br /><br />I realize it sounds a lot worse to say coke instead of soda.<br /><br />jacked up and coke bring about a whole other picture and most likely a whole other story.firedancerdancinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00478709046998860569noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6824105.post-1109267803846039192005-02-24T11:56:00.000-06:002005-02-24T11:56:00.000-06:00I loved it.
I was completely inside the head of a...I loved it.<br /><br />I was completely inside the head of a young dude all "jacked up on coke" as you put it. I could see everything. And I knew what "the sugars" was and knew that it was more severe than that. <br /><br />Love it. I want the book.<br /><br />But i'm simple minded.firedancerdancinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00478709046998860569noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6824105.post-1109258688581183982005-02-24T09:24:00.000-06:002005-02-24T09:24:00.000-06:00Thanks for the feedback dungsta! “The Sugars” or ...Thanks for the feedback dungsta! “The Sugars” or “The Sugar” is actually a ghetto reference to diabetes. But obviously his brother has a much more severe disability, that’s just what he understands it all to be, from what he has been told. <br /><br />Short stories are difficult for me, so there are probably going to be a great deal of holes in the presentation. But then again, there always are with short stories. They leave a great deal of gaps to be filled by the reader. That’s what I find so fascinating about them. <br /><br />Pubic servant…yup. Perception and synthesis. I was trying to *write* the way an eight year-old in that position would *talk*. Voice is difficult with short stories too. I’m practicing though. Eight year-olds who are jacked up on soda and television are a bit ADD, if not profoundly so. I was trying to convey the simplicity of an eight year-olds perception toward a more complex situation. I do not know if that came across. Still… need… practice.Fist of Truenesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17539333761513874499noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6824105.post-1109201708964962722005-02-23T17:35:00.000-06:002005-02-23T17:35:00.000-06:00Comments help me iron things out. Good, bad, indi...Comments help me iron things out. Good, bad, indifferent. It takes all kinds. If you bothered to click here, then you should bother to say something.<br /><br />Word.Fist of Truenesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17539333761513874499noreply@blogger.com